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I really shouldn\'t of come here,
shouldn\'t of come this far,
but just one look
and i thought you smiled my name
with just one look,
thatís why i came.

I told you, \"Tread lightly
this mind is thin ice,\"

but you say thatís okay-

-that one more shot can\'t kill me
and one more drag can\'t kill me
and one more drink can\'t kill me
and one more go can\'t kill me
and one more spin can\'t kill me
and one more pill can\'t kill me
and one more hit can\'t kill me
and one more drug can\'t kill me
just one more hour can\'t kill me-

And yes, you leave me standing,
but broken apart.
It all makes me sick,
sick and tired to my heart.

Everything sounds like rain
and everything feels like shame
when i\'m the only one to blame
for everything taken away.

It\'s dust to dust,
rust to rust,
all blown away.

And i\'m only afraid to die because i wake up everyday.
i love the cure. robert smith is a god. an art god.


the artwork was created by Yoshitaka Amano
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shadowraver Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2005   Writer
.....dear jesus...just the art work alone was worth seeing, but then i saw the real artwork...this is definately going to be on my fav. list of all time. please keep it up! i'm going to check out the rest of your stuff, and also "watch" you.

-me
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face-off Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2004
very nicely done, i like it!
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sporadictendencies Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2004
God, it sounds like a Cure song, as well! ;)

:} I like! Pretty picture caught my attention, too, so kudos to arteest.

I especially like the use of rhyme:

I told you, "Tread lightly
this mind is thin ice,"

My fave lines.
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peachgirl Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2004
I love this picture! It's really wicked!
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moonsongs33 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2004
its been awhile since ive read this and i come back to it again with more in my head and in my heart than before. its even more incredible.
its amazing how poetry seems to grow alongside with you. even though its always the same, theres so much in it that it cant all be taken it at once.
its like listening to your favorite song a year later and hearing something youve never heard before.

where are you josh?

write some more...........
ive never felt so thirsty for your writing than i do now.
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kishi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2003
Very nice, it has a lot of feeling to it. I like the chorus, and the concept of the song overall gives me chills (The good kind) Very nice work with this, you should put it to a tune.
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catella Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2003
wow, that's realy good, you are talented man, strong poem...
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-hush Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2003
Very nicely done, as per usual ;).

Digin the deepness in this one, the mind can really interact with the actions taking place.

Great work.
:)
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no-king-blues Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2003
thank you for taking the time. i always appreciate your comments.
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earthfaerie Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2003
Wow, that was very interesting to read. It does sound more like a song though. hmmm *thinks* you know any bands? That would be really awesome.

Take care

Dee
:hug:
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